Thursday, September 25, 2008

BAT BEAR VS THE JOKER

ONE UPON A TIME BAT BEAR CAME OUT AND SAW JOKERS HINCHMEN SWEENEY AND MCGURK THEY WERE STEALING MONEY FOR THE JOKER THEN BAT BEAR HIT SWEENE AND MCGURK AND THE JOKER RAN TOO THE VILLAINS LAIR THEN JOKER SAID WE NEED ANOTHER PLAN TO DESTROY BAT BEAR THEN THE PEGUIN HAD AN IDEA WHAT ABOUT WE FIND MORE POISON TO POISON BAT BEAR AND FINALY RULE THE WORLD THEN ALL THE VILLAINS HEAD TO THE STORE TO GET MORE ACID THEN THEY POUR THE ACID AND THE MILK JUG THEN THEY GIVE BAT BEAR THE POISON BUT HE DIDNT FALL FOR IT THEN ALL THE VILLAINS GO TOO JAIL THE END

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

carter this is the best story you have ever written. i love your blog it is awsome you are awsome and cool nicholas

Anonymous said...

Hi Carter: I was just wondering ...did the villains have their rights read to them before they went to jail. You know how the police tell them "You have the right to remain silent, anything you say may be used against you. You are entitled to have an attorney represent you. If you cannot afford one, one will be appointed for you". That is really important or else the Judge will just through the case out and the villains will be out on the street again. Remind your heroes in your stories to read the bad guy the "Miranda" rights....you know about wanting to talk or keeping quiet until they have an attorney. Love Grandma